ext_180835 ([identity profile] budgielover.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] shire_kitchen 2005-03-18 09:17 pm (UTC)

I am so impressed by this story! You combine Bookhobbits and Moviehobbits so perfectly, and add in the little 'taste of strawberries' for emotional impact. I was first delighted by Nick's comments on sisters, then by Frodo's wistfulness about not having any. And then the conversation between the Master and Rose! What a lovely way of exercising Frodo's foresight. This story incorporates so many elements (Frodo's poor appetite after the quest, Rose's concern, the inclusion of Nick) that I am just amazed.

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